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My Poor Heart (Free verse) by NewbieMe

How many times must you love someone not worthy? How many times must you suffer and bleed? How many times must you sacrifice yourself for someone? How many times must you endure this? What is it with you and pain? What is it with you and hurt? What is it with you and longing? What is it with you and hope? Why must you ignore the signs Why must you look past the truth Why must you tolerate the pain? Why must you keep going on? When will you accept all this? When will you stop and think? When will you think and act? When will you learn from this?

thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Feb-03/2:21 PM
Dull kiddo. Try a whole new aproach to your writing style. You need some depth.




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