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Atonement (Free verse) by aperfecttool77 I?m sorry for the laughter
I?m sorry for the tears
I?m sorry for knowing your favorite movies
And your deepest fears
I?m sorry for hugging you just because
And I apologize for the quiet rides home
I?m sorry for being there when the world brings you down
And when you have to face it on your own
I?m sorry I called just to say hello
And when we spend so much time apart
I?m sorry I don?t have the strength to tell you
Without your love, I?d have a broken heart
Up the ladder:
who?
Down the ladder:
Fate
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Posted: February 16, 2003 9:20 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2003 9:20 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.764676 Overall Rank: 11417 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.98
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17-Feb-03/5:35 AM
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Do shut up.
Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
this is terrible. let me give you a piece of advice my english teacher always told me: show me, don't tell me.
i like your name tho by the way
i'm sorry i read this poem.
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
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