poemranker ::Atonement by aperfecttool77

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Free verse № 40559

Atonement

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Feb 2003 · 6 comments

I?m sorry for the laughter I?m sorry for the tears I?m sorry for knowing your favorite movies And your deepest fears I?m sorry for hugging you just because And I apologize for the quiet rides home I?m sorry for being there when the world brings you down And when you have to face it on your own I?m sorry I called just to say hello And when we spend so much time apart I?m sorry I don?t have the strength to tell you Without your love, I?d have a broken heart

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6 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Feb-03/5:35 AM Reply
Do shut up.
[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-Feb-03/7:33 AM Reply
Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 17-Feb-03/5:31 PM Reply
this is terrible. let me give you a piece of advice my english teacher always told me: show me, don't tell me.
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 17-Feb-03/5:32 PM Reply
i like your name tho by the way
[1] <~> 18-Feb-03/12:31 PM Reply
i'm sorry i read this poem.
[0] razorgrin 18-Feb-03/1:51 PM Reply
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!