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Free verse № 41617

Agent Orange

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Feb 2003 · 2 comments

I go somewhere when i'm in Tibet. I am a garden of color and oranges and green heaven rivers. My family eats nothing but fruit. A few insects come around in the garden and populate the food with their larvae. i get insecticide on our clothes. i get insecticide on our fruit and Agent Orange up my nose, but there are just too many bugs living here. They get into my sheets and mouth. While i'm sleeping spiders spin webs in my throat and lay their eggs backs there. i wake up coughing insects. I don't know why they come where they are not wanted, but there are just too many bugs living here.

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[9] razorgrin 25-Feb-03/2:16 PM Reply
Not too big on the first line, but the rest is awesome.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 25-Feb-03/6:45 PM Reply
swell