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Agent Orange (Free verse) by Fear of Garbage
I go somewhere when i'm in Tibet. I am a garden of color and oranges and green heaven rivers. My family eats nothing but fruit. A few insects come around in the garden and populate the food with their larvae. i get insecticide on our clothes. i get insecticide on our fruit and Agent Orange up my nose, but there are just too many bugs living here. They get into my sheets and mouth. While i'm sleeping spiders spin webs in my throat and lay their eggs backs there. i wake up coughing insects. I don't know why they come where they are not wanted, but there are just too many bugs living here.

Up the ladder: On The First Night
Down the ladder: The lightest touch

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5362
Posted: February 25, 2003 1:53 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2003 1:53 PM PST
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[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.57 | 25-Feb-03/2:16 PM | Reply
Not too big on the first line, but the rest is awesome.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 25-Feb-03/6:45 PM | Reply
swell
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