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Have You Ever Felt That? (Free verse) by NewbieMe
Have you ever felt like you're dying? Not living but dying, every god damn day? When everyone tells you that it's gonna be alright but it seems like it's not? When you thought you can trust someone but he just stabbed you at the back? When you thought you can succeed in anything but then you see yourself failing miserably? When you thought you felt you were ok but turned out that you're not? When you thought noone knows you more than you do but then you realise you haven't the slightest idea who you are? And all of a sudden you just realise that you're dying, not living but dying, every god damn day. Have you ever felt that?

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.6414113
Overall Rank: 12389
Posted: February 21, 2003 4:24 AM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2003 4:24 AM PST
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[5] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 21-Feb-03/10:04 AM | Reply
Yes I have. A Summer living pretty much alone on a college campus will do that to you. On the other hand when everyone comes back in the Fall you appreciate the company that much more.
[n/a] NewbieMe @ 202.70.102.69 > OneFingerAnswer | 21-Feb-03/4:10 PM | Reply
i just graduated and i'm still looking for a job so that's probably what i'm feeling right now. thanks for the comment.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 22-Feb-03/9:43 AM | Reply
Everyday.
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