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Everyday Implied But Never Declared (Free verse) by NewbieMe
He loves me, he loves me Is all I ever thought He cares for me, he cares for me Definitely! Of this I was so sure We'll be happy together, happy together Of this I had my hopes Till the day I thought he'd asked me to marry him, marry him Then you said, "Marry You? Whatever gave you that idea?" Don't you love me? love me? Then you said, "Love You? When did I tell you that?" But I thought you care for me? care for me? Then you said. "Care For You? You must be mad!" But why did you, ... uhh? But it felt like you, ... uhh? And I thought you, ... uhh? Then you said, 'You're Terribly Mistaken! I never implied or declared anything!"

Up the ladder: Hehehe
Down the ladder: Oh boo

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.875
Weighted score: 4.4284997
Overall Rank: 12934
Posted: February 21, 2003 7:21 AM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2003 7:21 AM PST
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[6] spank me baby yeah @ 62.105.88.10 | 21-Feb-03/9:11 AM | Reply
liked this more have a six
[n/a] NewbieMe @ 202.70.102.69 > spank me baby yeah | 21-Feb-03/4:15 PM | Reply
Thanks. i just write what i think. i really don't aim to please anyone, i just do write what i want. thanks again.
[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 22-Feb-03/9:45 AM | Reply
Sad but I see this scenario played out everyday.
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Feb-03/12:40 PM | Reply
Congradulations! See, that wasn't so tough.
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