poemranker ::Everyday Implied But Never Declared by NewbieMe

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Free verse № 41003

Everyday Implied But Never Declared

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

He loves me, he loves me Is all I ever thought He cares for me, he cares for me Definitely! Of this I was so sure We'll be happy together, happy together Of this I had my hopes Till the day I thought he'd asked me to marry him, marry him Then you said, "Marry You? Whatever gave you that idea?" Don't you love me? love me? Then you said, "Love You? When did I tell you that?" But I thought you care for me? care for me? Then you said. "Care For You? You must be mad!" But why did you, ... uhh? But it felt like you, ... uhh? And I thought you, ... uhh? Then you said, 'You're Terribly Mistaken! I never implied or declared anything!"

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4 comments

[6] spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/9:11 AM Reply
liked this more have a six
[n/a] NewbieMe › spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/4:15 PM Reply
Thanks. i just write what i think. i really don't aim to please anyone, i just do write what i want. thanks again.
[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Feb-03/9:45 AM Reply
Sad but I see this scenario played out everyday.
[0] Bachus 22-Feb-03/12:40 PM Reply
Congradulations! See, that wasn't so tough.