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Oh boo (Free verse) by Modulo
Whenever I'm feeling blue, And it doesn't quite fit, I think of my friend who would slap his thigh to no end, and tell me "Cheer up, you sack of shit!"

Down the ladder: Loneliness

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.875
Weighted score: 4.4284997
Overall Rank: 12935
Posted: March 11, 2003 7:37 AM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2003 7:37 AM PST
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[6] famenglory @ 151.205.196.207 | 11-Mar-03/7:08 PM | Reply
sounds um like he loves you greatly
[5] Nanshe @ 67.87.76.32 | 11-Mar-03/9:37 PM | Reply
Please delte "to no end,". Thank you for flying with us.
[6] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 22-Apr-04/11:32 AM | Reply
cute.
[6] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 > nentwined | 22-Apr-04/11:32 AM | Reply
Though I think this should be a 'pimple' instead of 'free verse'.
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