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Senses I Have (Free verse) by NewbieMe
My eyes see reality My mouth speaks of sincerity My ears listen to honesty and my heart gives itself fully
Up the ladder: Breathless.
Down the ladder: licking my tongue
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5555553
Weighted score: 5.2777777
Overall Rank: 3784
Posted: November 10, 2002 3:05 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2002 3:05 AM PST
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[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 22-Feb-03/9:28 AM | Reply
Truth be told we only see what we want to see
Tounges lie with ease
Your ears are like our eyes
If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die

Still to be fair not a bad poem -6-
[n/a] NewbieMe @ 202.81.160.21 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 22-Feb-03/7:12 PM | Reply
"If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die"

i died countless times and yet i never learn and so i continue to die
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