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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
Read with caution!
licking my tongue (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
Against time and the damages of the brain Sharpen and calibrate. Not yet in full, Yet in some arbitrated part Order the facade of a listless summer. Spies, moving delicately among the enemy, The younger sons, the fools, Set somewhat aside the dialects and the stained skins of feigned madness, Ambiguously signal, baffle, the eluded signal. Edgar, weeping for pity, to the shelf of that sick bluff, Bring your blind father, and describe a little; Behold him, part wakened, fallen among field flowers shallow But undisclosed, withdraw. Not yet that naked hour when armed. Disguise flung flat, squarely we challenge the fiend. Still, comrade, the running of the beasts and the ruining heaven.... Captivate the old wild king.

Up the ladder: Senses I Have
Down the ladder: Untitled

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5555553
Weighted score: 5.2777777
Overall Rank: 3785
Posted: November 11, 2002 9:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 9:35 PM PST
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[9] The Eskimo King @ 212.219.142.161 | 12-Nov-02/2:26 AM | Reply
Professionals, huh, damn you!!
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Nov-02/3:37 PM | Reply
that's a hoot.almost a torch song. 8.
[7] god'swife @ 209.179.210.132 | 13-Nov-02/1:08 AM | Reply
Best so far.
[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 64.12.96.234 > god'swife | 13-Nov-02/9:38 PM | Reply
I have a lot of them..

used to do nothing but write and

wonder why I was so young.

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