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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
Read with caution! licking my tongue (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
Against time and the damages of the brain
Sharpen and calibrate. Not yet in full,
Yet in some arbitrated part
Order the facade of a listless summer.
Spies, moving delicately among the enemy,
The younger sons, the fools,
Set somewhat aside the dialects and the stained skins of feigned madness,
Ambiguously signal, baffle, the eluded signal.
Edgar, weeping for pity, to the shelf of that sick bluff,
Bring your blind father, and describe a little;
Behold him, part wakened, fallen among field flowers shallow
But undisclosed, withdraw.
Not yet that naked hour when armed.
Disguise flung flat, squarely we challenge the fiend.
Still, comrade, the running of the beasts and the ruining heaven....
Captivate the old wild king.
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Posted: November 11, 2002 9:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 9:35 PM PST
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