Poemranker [Poem: Untitled] [by ==Doylum] Thu Nov 21 14:14:30 PST 2024

[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 9-Dec-02/9:12 AM | Reply

Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me.
Alas.

[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.122.107 > Bill Z Bub | 9-Dec-02/12:32 PM | Reply

first of all, yeah? thanks for the tip! What should i call it? Secondly, yeah? thanks for the tip! what should i call it?
or alternatively
Firstly - arse
secondly - burger
Oh I see another knave, well they would be meaningless if you have no title
Anass

[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > ==Doylum | 9-Dec-02/6:18 PM | Reply

Okay, okay, I guess I came on way too strong. Untitled poems are just a pet peeve of mine. As for the haikus, I just meant that I have no idea what they are about, and maybe a title would help. Peace?

[7] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Bill Z Bub | 9-Dec-02/8:55 PM | Reply

traditionally, haikus are untitled.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > <~> | 9-Dec-02/9:01 PM | Reply

I wasn't sure about that one, but I think you're right. Still, the word "untitled" is still a title. On this site, anyway. It's just a crappy, common title.
And it's been a while since I've seen a traditional haiku here.
Like I said, it has become a pet peeve of mine.

[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.120.81 > Bill Z Bub | 10-Dec-02/2:26 PM | Reply

oh my god christ! You poor poor boy
just a modicum sir just a modicum

[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.120.81 > Bill Z Bub | 10-Dec-02/2:55 PM | Reply

Came on to strong? Came on to strong? You came on, my dear, like Sir Geoffrey Howe in his vest and grots. Be savage doll face.

[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/11:25 AM | Reply

strangely sexual.