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Untitled (Haiku) by ==Doylum
You may have wings sir! But i have a mighty sword Are your veins as blue?

Up the ladder: licking my tongue
Down the ladder: Fortune cookie

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5555553
Weighted score: 5.2777777
Overall Rank: 3786
Posted: December 9, 2002 4:22 AM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2002 4:27 AM PST
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[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 9-Dec-02/9:12 AM | Reply
Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me.
Alas.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.122.107 > Bill Z Bub | 9-Dec-02/12:32 PM | Reply
first of all, yeah? thanks for the tip! What should i call it? Secondly, yeah? thanks for the tip! what should i call it?
or alternatively
Firstly - arse
secondly - burger
Oh I see another knave, well they would be meaningless if you have no title
Anass
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > ==Doylum | 9-Dec-02/6:18 PM | Reply
Okay, okay, I guess I came on way too strong. Untitled poems are just a pet peeve of mine. As for the haikus, I just meant that I have no idea what they are about, and maybe a title would help. Peace?
[7] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Bill Z Bub | 9-Dec-02/8:55 PM | Reply
traditionally, haikus are untitled.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > <~> | 9-Dec-02/9:01 PM | Reply
I wasn't sure about that one, but I think you're right. Still, the word "untitled" is still a title. On this site, anyway. It's just a crappy, common title.
And it's been a while since I've seen a traditional haiku here.
Like I said, it has become a pet peeve of mine.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.120.81 > Bill Z Bub | 10-Dec-02/2:26 PM | Reply
oh my god christ! You poor poor boy
just a modicum sir just a modicum
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.120.81 > Bill Z Bub | 10-Dec-02/2:55 PM | Reply
Came on to strong? Came on to strong? You came on, my dear, like Sir Geoffrey Howe in his vest and grots. Be savage doll face.

[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/11:25 AM | Reply
strangely sexual.
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