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Senses I Have (Free verse) by NewbieMe

My eyes see reality My mouth speaks of sincerity My ears listen to honesty and my heart gives itself fully

thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Feb-03/9:28 AM
Truth be told we only see what we want to see
Tounges lie with ease
Your ears are like our eyes
If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die

Still to be fair not a bad poem -6-




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