regarding some deleted poem...	25-Feb-03/6:51 PM
O.K. Maybe its just the image of groping without the understanding of the metaphor thats being played out here or it could be that I just don't get the point of this one but this is my least favorite of your poems to date. Still a good poem it just hits me the wrong way. -6-
Re: sick and demented by sk8boardandpoems	25-Feb-03/6:58 PM
You managed to entrall my attention till the end with a tedious and unrefined grasp till the part about "examine the murder weapon". Then you derailed me back to not caring about your outcome. Your beginning could use work as well. -6-
Re: A teenager's thoughts on Waking up. by Jarah	27-Feb-03/1:38 PM
Oi!! How many times has that happened to me. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Feb-03/1:44 PM
Macbeth and Korea... Whatever will you think up next. Golden Limonade -10- Just Golden.
Re: Music Box by scornofangels	10-Mar-03/2:00 PM
Nice ryhme scheme but the rest of its trite and dull. No offence but -6- is all your gonna get out of me on this one. And 2 of those points are for the title.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/2:05 PM
Well you I guess you kinda had to survive to write this but like D.A. is trying to point out you don't need the words (semi-automatic) behind 9mm. Other than that I just don't really like this poem cause its probably something I'd write in study hall or during a boring lecture. -6-
Re: PC by NewbieMe	10-Mar-03/2:07 PM
Yep. Or else the mouse freezes up. Creative. -10-
Re: A Tale of Peter Pan by NewbieMe	10-Mar-03/2:09 PM
Damn cigarette advertisers got to petey too eh? Great job I enjoyed this one. -10-
Re: smiles from heaven by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/12:24 PM
Touching. I suggest you go over it and fix your typos(by rereading it because spell check misses alot <like angle in the 2nd line>). As It stands -8-
Re: A Little Peace by intheailse	21-Mar-03/12:35 PM
Drivel. oh umm... no... wait... Yeah, just plain drivel. There just isn't anything here. Not trying to be mean but you are way too vague. Who do you want to kiss your eyes? What are you afraid of the dark? Are you just trying to be confusing and pointless in your second stanza? A little peace of/from what? When your poem answers those questions (Or at least some of them) then I'll try and rate you better. For now (hopefully without hard feelings) I give this a -3-. Rewrite it and I'll be happy to give you a higher score.
Re: Too Much by intheailse	21-Mar-03/12:41 PM
I like the ryhme scheme. Plus the flow of the words isn't that bad. Fairly good. -7-
Re: Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse	21-Mar-03/12:43 PM
Do you mean 'in your hand is my heart'. Good other than that. -8-
Re: Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/12:51 PM
Its sorta overly redundant in places like 'smell your sweet smell' and 'thank god;god has let us recieve'. I like this. -8- P.S. You might want to fix your typos before anyone else rates this (trust me people do take off for that here).
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Mar-03/12:54 PM
YOU CAN'T RAPE THE WILLING!!!!!
Re: Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni	21-Mar-03/12:57 PM
All depends on the artist and how well they hide the piece of art in question.
Re: Exiting Shadows by Caducus	21-Mar-03/1:03 PM
Cliche done with class. Very well painted words Caducus. -10-
Re: Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Mar-03/1:13 PM
Yes, Yes, quite true. I was hoping for the hippie ways of sex, drugs, and peace to come back and say "hell no we won't go!" but no. -10-
Re: Gods Gift of Love by mckenzie	21-Mar-03/8:11 PM
Still a few grammatical errors but nowhere near as many as I usually make. Don't let D.A. get under ur skin, He thinks he knows everything. -9- and half If I could give one.
Re: in a singular way by daniella	21-Mar-03/9:44 PM
Nice. You write like someone who has either piloted before or spent hours endlessy facinated with flight. Either way -10- in my book.
Re: flaxen you by daniella	21-Mar-03/9:46 PM
No ryhme what so ever but good none the less. -7-