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Tearing Me Apart (again) (Lyric) by intheailse
It seems like a life ago, I was drifting away, from you, again. And just like a puppet, without a string, I fall to the ground, again. And without a word, without a trace, your leaving me, again. And like a nightmare, that won't end, I'm a dreamer, again. You're tearing me apart, in your hand is my heart.

Up the ladder: kiss
Down the ladder: So Happy

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10524
Posted: March 21, 2003 6:59 AM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 1:04 PM PST
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[9] Blindproject217 @ 68.86.0.162 | 21-Mar-03/11:16 AM | Reply
Very nice
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 21-Mar-03/12:43 PM | Reply
Do you mean 'in your hand is my heart'. Good other than that. -8-
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