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Tearing Me Apart (again) (Lyric) by intheailse

It seems like a life ago, I was drifting away, from you, again. And just like a puppet, without a string, I fall to the ground, again. And without a word, without a trace, your leaving me, again. And like a nightmare, that won't end, I'm a dreamer, again. You're tearing me apart, in your hand is my heart.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-03/12:43 PM
Do you mean 'in your hand is my heart'. Good other than that. -8-




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