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A Tale of Peter Pan (Free verse) by NewbieMe
Peter Pan wants to be a man
He told Wendy about his plan
We will fly away from never never land
And go back to where we came from
I no longer want to be a boy in the pages of this book
I'm tired of defeating the pirates and captain hook
I want to go back the real world
Where people are born and they grow old
I can't wait for my first sip of wine
To light my first ciggy and dine
To form clouds of smoke
While I sit still and joke
I'll be a handsome man i know
I'll even grow a mustache right under my nose
And you Wendy will grow to be a lovely woman
For you Wendy I'll be a gentleman
I'll take you out on a date
We'll dance, go places at hours so late
Tell me Wendy wouldn't it be great?
For you and I to go out on a wonderful date?
Wendy answered "I don't know,
and on the same note i don't think so"
You will always be a boy trap in this book
You will constantly defeat the pirates and the hook
Try as you may you will never grow old
You can never get away because your future has been foretold
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4536
Posted: March 10, 2003 1:59 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 1:59 AM PST
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