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Isolate (Free verse) by Beseech A lonely soul doth wander
no purpose to his name
no place he's coming from
no place he's going to
A lonely soul doth wander
no care or pain it feels.
it has no will to live
with the burden of this world
A lonely soul doth wander
no reason to go on
The darkness doth envelop
the hope that still remains
A lonely soul doth lie
no reason to get up
a page doth lie written
and this is what it said:
ISOLATE
Up the ladder:
A Tale of Peter Pan
Down the ladder:
OM
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Posted: March 30, 2003 1:39 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2003 1:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.201706 Overall Rank: 4537 Comments:
crap poem, just because you did it
Beseech don't listen to wink minded people like 'lark angel' just feel sorry for them since they have nothing better to do then to TRY and pray on people. I honestly Like this 9 :)
I enjoyed reading this poem, I was able to fell the writers feelings, I like that!
why thank you. Its good you can do that for someone who REALLY struggles to get a whole poem done. Ive got a stack of unfinished ones in my bedroom.
Yeah interesting. doth? Also what with the kat, poss dog referring thing? What are you trying to say??
i cant remember who told me, cudve been u, or scott aka dog
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I got one too, see!