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smiles from heaven (Free verse) by mckenzie
You where gods special gift from above that coo and laughed and loved.. You'r mommas special little angel looken down with love it is so surprising how you touched so many lives in so little time, such pleasure in such a little hug Then one day God called for you, called for his special angel,called you home. Life is not as bright or as pleasent and so empty at times but I know you look down and know you are loved loved by many,loved by lots You where our special angel and we are glad we got to spend what time we had with you to look in those deep sea of blue eyes and that great big smile of joy. We owe you so much for the joy you brought into our lives and even now that you are gone you still have a special place,a huge hold on our hearts You are forever to live in our hearts and beam in our memories sometimes God does answer prayers, just not the way we all wont him too....... In Sweet Memories and forever on your minds and our hearts CHAYTON WYATT BURTON NOVEMBER 18 2002-FEBUARY 02 2003 Sleep our sweet little angel you are home...

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4560
Posted: March 12, 2003 6:57 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 2:33 PM PST
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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 21-Mar-03/12:24 PM | Reply
Touching. I suggest you go over it and fix your typos(by rereading it because spell check misses alot <like angle in the 2nd line>). As It stands -8-
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