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flaxen you (Free verse) by daniella so intricate like him
with an ordered chaos
of pristine passion.
the tumult underscores his eyes
and circles round
his kiss. it comes soft
and fierce in its mount.
linen, rough and tempting.
should, i would wear only him
next to my skin?
till he furrows
down beneath me
conquering my inner core
and all its rounded corners.
Up the ladder:
What Do You Want From Me?
Down the ladder:
sic homina ad papyrum
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Posted: March 21, 2003 7:46 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 8:11 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5738 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37
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21-Mar-03/9:46 PM
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No ryhme what so ever but good none the less. -7-
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daniella @ 200.68.205.62
> thepinkbunnyofdoom
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27-Jul-03/9:26 PM
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free verse don't cost a thing...
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