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flaxen you (Free verse) by daniella

so intricate like him with an ordered chaos of pristine passion. the tumult underscores his eyes and circles round his kiss. it comes soft and fierce in its mount. linen, rough and tempting. should, i would wear only him next to my skin? till he furrows down beneath me conquering my inner core and all its rounded corners.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-03/9:46 PM
No ryhme what so ever but good none the less. -7-




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