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Too Much (Lyric) by intheailse
I wish i could run and hide away, leave behind these lonesome days, all these faces have no name, by myself I'll fade away. All the weight of all my fears, I don't think my shoulders can take, I've had enough of this feeling, but these thoughts I cannot shake. Hoping and dreaming that's all I do, living for a life I hope will come true, here as I stand all I do is wait, but tell me, my friend, what else can I do. Everyday my head rolls up and around, seconds pass from a smile to a frown, my head and heart are swimming now, but tell me, my love, am I going to drown? It's too much, too much too take.

Up the ladder: Why I Chose My Name
Down the ladder: Fleeting Fantasy

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6539
Posted: March 21, 2003 6:56 AM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 6:56 AM PST
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[10] Blindproject217 @ 68.86.0.162 | 21-Mar-03/11:19 AM | Reply
This is an awesome poem, I feel the same alot of the time, I know I have skill and potential but its all just a pipe dream unless I do something about it.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 21-Mar-03/12:41 PM | Reply
I like the ryhme scheme. Plus the flow of the words isn't that bad. Fairly good. -7-
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