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Music Box (Ode) by scornofangels
The girl in the box
sits upon my shelf
hiding from the world,
keeping to herself.
When I need her most
I open up the lid
the bear the light
on where she hid.
My lullaby plays,
in her dress, she twirls.
She smiles sweetly
and her joy is heard.
It's the same old song
and the same old dance
to hide her feelings
behind a mask.
And when the song ends,
when the lid will close,
in the dark she?ll cry.
But no one knows.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8333333
Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12959
Posted: March 10, 2003 9:56 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 9:56 AM PST
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No offence but -6- is all your gonna get out of me on this one. And 2 of those points are for the title.