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The Warriors Song (Haiku) by cleverdevice
Hark! My swift strong sword In ethereal beauty Cast down injustice. Hark! My subtle bow With your silence and your stealth Embrace my virtue. Hark! My steadfast shield Deflect the blows of falsehood And ward off my foes. God of Grace watch me God of Fortune spur me on, God of Love lead me. Spirit be my flame Ignite my impassioned fire And drive me to war.

Up the ladder: ice cream
Down the ladder: Music Box

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8333333
Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12953
Posted: January 17, 2003 5:18 AM PST; Last modified: April 11, 2003 1:01 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] poemwanker @ 81.132.42.59 | 17-Jan-03/11:42 AM | Reply
Heark yourself.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Apr-03/12:44 AM | Reply
/mp3/The Crutchling.mp3

Ignite this.
[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 12-Apr-03/12:39 PM | Reply
Too much D&D for some body.
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