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ice cream (Free verse) by rosiebailey
if some one tryed to nick my ice cream i would have to enter there dream so when they go to sleep i will have to make weep by hitting them with a hickory stick

Up the ladder: When It's All Over
Down the ladder: The Warriors Song

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8333333
Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12957
Posted: December 5, 2002 4:49 AM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 4:49 AM PST
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[10] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 5-Dec-02/4:55 AM | Reply
So would I;but I would use something more painful,like a cheese grater.
Perhaps this is a synopsis for a new 'Nightmare on elm street' film?
Or perhaps not.
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 5-Dec-02/5:08 AM | Reply
Ice cream is excellent moisturiser so my mates tell me
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