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Free verse № 25801

When It's All Over

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

Where will I be, When It's All over. Will you still be with me, When it's all over. I'm not the only one, Who's waiting, I'm not the only one, Who's Wanting. To know, where I will be, And what will be next, When It's All Over. Will I be happier, or gain more pain? Will I hurt people, or shall I change? Will things be different, the slightest bit? Or Will Nothing change at all. I just want to find the answers before it's all over, Cause I'm afraid, afterwards, it might be too late. I wish there was someway to tell, A way to figure it all out. What if I, Choose the wrong decisions. What If I, Make the wrong choices. What if You, Are right. What If You, Are tryin to save me. What If You, Know the answers. Will I realize that this is the way of the world? Or Is not? Will I realize this doesn't mean much? Or does it? When It's all over, will I cry. When It's all over, Will I have a chance to cry? When It's all over, Will you still be there for me? When It's all over, Will it take away my misery? When It's all over, Will It ever be?

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2 comments

[0] poetandknowit 19-Nov-02/7:29 PM Reply
Seriously now. This site is for real poems.
[4] Caducus 20-Nov-02/4:53 AM Reply
No offence intended but it goes on a bit and becomes tedious as you keep making the same point, and the point in which your making is not sold poignantly enough for it to move me.