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I Live My Life The Way I Should (Free verse) by liljsmith87
I live my life a happy teen Not pushed around Or being teased My friends are great My school is good I live my life The way I should I get in trouble I make mistakes I sometimes stumble But still ok I have my ups And have my downs Have my smiles And have my frowns But my family's great My town is good And I still do say I live my life The way I should Last night I lay in bed And wondered why I aint dead With the problems in my life Like my 3 heart surgeries And still wonder how I'm alive And think Well the doctors were great The people around me were good Thanks to everyone I live my life The way I should

Up the ladder: the small space
Down the ladder: When It's All Over

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8333333
Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12950
Posted: October 14, 2002 5:34 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 5:34 PM PDT
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[6] deleted user @ 216.61.132.107 | 14-Oct-02/6:49 PM | Reply
Simple, and sweet! Three heart surgeries?! Wow! It's nice to read someone concentrating on the good in their lives.
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