| Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog |
2-Feb-03/1:16 AM |
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Zzinnia66 are you inbreed??? Cause this poems great and well you do leave alot of comments that have absolutly nothing to do with either the poem you post to or even the topic of the comments posted.
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| Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil |
2-Feb-03/4:22 AM |
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A big zero for taste. In fact I'd give it two if i could.
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| Re: Slow motion by INTRANSIT |
2-Feb-03/4:23 AM |
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| Re: wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w |
2-Feb-03/4:32 AM |
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That gellar part is just outta left field some where and its not like the rest of the poem is tied together very well either so enjoy your zero.
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| Re: As I lay by Katie |
2-Feb-03/4:45 AM |
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Could be better. Have you read I'm a snob by zero? i think it was zero but the point is you used almost everything he mentions about pimple poems(guilty of that myself). Try reading that then coming back and revising this one. -6-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Feb-03/5:56 PM |
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Lovely arguement but if we are love and we try to posses love is that like trying to cage ourselves?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Feb-03/6:05 PM |
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The last stanza, while i like it doesn't really work well with the one before it. I really think you should switch Stanzas 6 and 7. It just seems alot better to me that way.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Feb-03/6:18 PM |
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I like the airport scene combined with porn star/whores thing to point out that its like a really good 1 night stand. Very good.-10- Just for using the words porn star, cortex, and whores, with other brain imagery and not boring me.
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4-Feb-03/3:35 PM |
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| Re: The Stand... an off rip by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/8:41 PM |
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Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!
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7-Feb-03/8:46 PM |
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Yes as a religion buff I'm confused by the three day thing as well. But other than that your writing is profound as usual.
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7-Feb-03/8:49 PM |
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| Re: Ghost Girl by wordontheverge |
8-Feb-03/10:10 PM |
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Ummm... But in a good way so -10-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Feb-03/10:18 PM |
Now that was interesting and for a second the numbers had me a little confused, but I get it now and I like what I see(even if not many other people here will because its got the whole bleeding heart teen thing going on and they hate that) so I gave it a -8-.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Feb-03/7:41 AM |
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Your a little too vague. Who is she and what happened that caused the faith to die? Most Importantly What Can't You Take? I like the Idea and what you barely get across but you need more detail. -6- For now but I think you can make it better.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Feb-03/7:45 AM |
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But let others take it AS a no. Seems just a slight bit redundant. -6-
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| Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
10-Feb-03/1:27 PM |
Still perverting the minds of the you I see Smiley. -10-
P.S. on a side note I have heard that scarfing does give a male an instant hard on. Just thought I'd share.
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/1:34 PM |
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| Re: Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels |
15-Feb-03/5:23 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Feb-03/5:57 PM |
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P&K there is absolutly nothing wrong with being either young or British. Caducus there is some good stuff in this poem but it just doesn't tickle my fancy. -6-
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