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The Stand... an off rip (Haiku) by horus8
Container explodes. Scientists and Doctors flee. Ebola virus.

Up the ladder: Smurfette
Down the ladder: Smiling

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4873724
Overall Rank: 2811
Posted: February 7, 2003 6:08 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2003 6:08 PM PST
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[9] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 7-Feb-03/6:27 PM | Reply
Sucks, delete. Try writing some poems about the deafening silence that is living alone in the world or something. 9.
[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 7-Feb-03/8:41 PM | Reply
Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!
[9] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 9-Feb-03/7:02 PM | Reply
Jesus christ I just downloaded Sergeant Pepper, I don't remember it sucking shit this bad. Gimme helter skelter any day.
[6] ==Doylum @ 62.64.205.29 > TanHand | 12-Feb-03/5:07 AM | Reply
Hello fattits, giz a tune from your musical ring. I request ding dong merrily not any of that modern rubbish
So you think Sergeant Peppers is good then?
Is sucking shit a bad thing?
If so then being bad at it would be good wouldn't it?
Is it therefore a recommendation?
What other recommendations would make?
[9] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 > ==Doylum | 12-Feb-03/10:04 AM | Reply
It is horrible. Cliched, overproduced, boring, doesn't rock in the slightest. Too arty, not arty enough. Stupid. Important? Yes. Well done? Yes. Something I like listening to? No. The album is far too self important. Abbey Road is much, much better.
[6] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.67.7 | 7-Mar-03/7:46 AM | Reply
much shorter than the original book. They could've saved a lot of paper.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 7-Mar-03/1:45 PM | Reply
Sucks, delete. Try writing some poems about the deafening silence that is living alone in the world or something. 9.
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