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NASA Fireworks (Free verse) by TheDevil
Let's light up the skies! The world's in need of some cheer! Burn up Texas as a surprise And make dear NASA turn a tad queer. It'll kill a few, but what the hell -- 'Tis just a pity Bush wasn't on as well.

Up the ladder: Sisters of mercy
Down the ladder: This Stinks

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6842105
Weighted score: 3.746613
Overall Rank: 13523
Posted: February 1, 2003 8:05 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2003 8:05 PM PST
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[n/a] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.5 | 2-Feb-03/2:49 AM | Reply
You do know that you suck at this right?
[1] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.30 | 2-Feb-03/4:14 AM | Reply
Full marks for speed and topicality. Two out of ten for versification. Zero for taste.
[0] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 2-Feb-03/4:22 AM | Reply
A big zero for taste. In fact I'd give it two if i could.
[0] brokenwing @ 211.28.96.5 | 2-Feb-03/6:07 AM | Reply
Some people are just so heartless....
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.250 > brokenwing | 2-Feb-03/10:22 AM | Reply
This is just sweet little Tintigales way of being on the edge and controversial. Really, he is a sweet boy. Forgive him.
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Feb-03/3:43 PM | Reply
I was hoping for something a bit more intelligent, but then againn this is poemranker not Yale. Stipend anyone?
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 > Shardik | 2-Feb-03/4:44 PM | Reply
i'm in.
[10] razorgrin @ 207.179.152.71 | 2-Feb-03/4:30 PM | Reply
Explosions rock. Icarian joy and gladness.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 2-Feb-03/10:15 PM | Reply
How delightfully topical!!!
[4] brazen @ 68.84.225.163 | 2-Feb-03/10:30 PM | Reply
anybody see the news footage where they actually showed a cinged space helmut in the field...pretty cool looking.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23 > brazen | 3-Feb-03/5:48 AM | Reply
Oh God, the alien ex-Chancellor of Germany coronated in a field? I had always hoped this day would never come! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
[4] brazen @ 68.84.225.163 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 3-Feb-03/1:43 PM | Reply
de germans, boss...de germans.

helmet.
[0] god'swife @ 209.179.212.17 | 3-Feb-03/8:29 AM | Reply
Stupid stupid boy. Not even clever. You real have a low standard for yourself don't you?
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Feb-03/2:45 PM | Reply
Is a radioactive smurf forced underwater a snork?
[2] deleted user @ 168.18.220.177 | 5-Feb-03/4:56 AM | Reply
I think the author's name is appropriate. Not in very good taste.
[1] x311 @ 64.83.223.38 | 5-Feb-03/11:33 AM | Reply
Hmmm...I really don't think this is the right time for the sentiment expressed in your poem.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Feb-03/7:54 PM | Reply
Airballe.
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