Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	31-Jan-03/4:47 PM
Next time try Drinking Vodka open cupboard, grab bottle sit back and enjoy
Re: Elegy by Quarton	31-Jan-03/12:13 PM
Only one word is needed to describe this. Good!
Re: Slow motion by INTRANSIT	1-Feb-03/7:28 PM
Makes a good poening to a story but not much of a poem by itself. It needs more. I'll vote when you add to it.
Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar	1-Feb-03/1:20 PM
This is Great. Almost funnier than the T-Shirt.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Feb-03/1:38 PM
Ending needs reworked but i really liked the "stomach punched hangover"
Re: Life by marvelis	1-Feb-03/2:24 PM
Uh??? I've read this Over and over again and it just doesn't make much sense to me. -3-
Re: Great Waters of End by marvelis	1-Feb-03/2:34 PM
This seems like a longer version of life. Which wouldn't be so bad but It feels like your just saying the same things over and over again. -5- Try making this shorter or life longer.
Re: Confession by marvelis	1-Feb-03/2:37 PM
Much better than your other two. -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Feb-03/2:43 PM
Sad. Just Sad. Hope this cheers you up. -10-
Re: Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus	1-Feb-03/2:51 PM
Ahahahahahahahahahahaha. Wait nope Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha still funny.
Re: A Little Nightmare by Teen14	31-Jan-03/4:52 PM
Your close to caputing it but maybe a few less gomez runs at the beginning so that you build a sort of increasing frenzy.
Re: Dancers of the Night by Teen14	1-Feb-03/3:00 PM
Wait smoke wants darkness to end? Smoke causes Darkness. Other than that i like it -7-
Re: Run Forest! Run... by Bachus	1-Feb-03/3:03 PM
Hehehehe Thats twice in one day you made me laugh. -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Feb-03/3:08 PM
How sad.
Re: Equality by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/12:09 PM
I know I don't have any room to talk but I don't know the "so run far and pray your feet be swift be quick witted" just Doesn't seem to fit in well.
Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik	31-Jan-03/12:17 PM
Got to agree with razorgrin this is quite swell.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jan-03/9:00 AM
This one is pretty dull even for a real life occurance
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jan-03/5:04 PM
I like what I see. It has real potental and no I'm not going to say it needs depth. I think it just needs to be longer.
Re: A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87	29-Jan-03/5:29 PM
I agree its a ten but you might change threw to through. It'd make it so that someone didn't mentally trip over your words, unless that was what you were going for.
Re: A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf	29-Jan-03/5:24 PM
Been there done that and i like this one. So i give you an dime.