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Equality (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 My eyes glint maliciously
At morrows break
I know not who to tell
Who will understand
That I am chosen
To smite the earth
To loath all that is cruel
All who are subject to greed
Why should one wish to know
That it is I who cause discord
My own pain becomes
The voice of wrath
So run far and pray
Your feet are swift
Be quick witted
Else I shall catch those that
Frolic among the wicked
There I too am meant to join the
Ranks of those that I chase
Would any one wish to destroy me?
Would you change your mind if
You knew I wished my demise?
Up the ladder:
Amelioration is only relative
Down the ladder:
I thought I could fly
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Posted: January 1, 2003 9:27 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12118 Comments:
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Carvaceous @ 68.100.130.217
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2-Jan-03/4:21 PM
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Wow! I really like this one!!!
I bought a homeless man Doritos with my credit card from 7/11 today...I'm probably poorer than he is...but hey it was the gesture right?
its aigth but im more into the love poems sorry
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!
ok who the f gave me a zero. I'll find out and critique your work accordingly. Oh foulest being spawned of hell prepare for your day of judgement. I will be waiting for you to fall and strike in your moment of shame.
i bought a yellow fin tuna, a de-netter today, and some tube socks with my chevron americanium card he grew wings and now he's a flying fish, i heard though later, he traded the tube socks for sock in united. the smartest flying fish i've ever whipped out plastic for. know why? i can make a difference and the guilt is hurting my sole. thanks for helping me help myself, you're an angel in white with wings and compassion and everlasting life. impressive and, yet holy. groundbreaking alternatives. in all honesty, i'm mes-mo-rized and such.e
quite interesting.....how'd this come about. I hate angels...keep checking in with my poetry for a while..I have a poem about them....angels will fall
Do you know, I think this may be one of the funniest poemes to be found here. Keep it up!
Aww..and you even think we care about your sad sad pain of runny eyeliner...here's a zero-flavoured lollipop.
I know I don't have any room to talk but I don't know the "so run far and pray your feet be swift be quick witted" just Doesn't seem to fit in well.
You need to shut up and suck my Rodzilla.
Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!
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