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Equality

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Jan 2003 · Edited 25 Jul 2003 · 12 comments

My eyes glint maliciously At morrows break I know not who to tell Who will understand That I am chosen To smite the earth To loath all that is cruel All who are subject to greed Why should one wish to know That it is I who cause discord My own pain becomes The voice of wrath So run far and pray Your feet are swift Be quick witted Else I shall catch those that Frolic among the wicked There I too am meant to join the Ranks of those that I chase Would any one wish to destroy me? Would you change your mind if You knew I wished my demise?

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12 comments

[9] Carvaceous 2-Jan-03/4:21 PM Reply

Wow! I really like this one!!!

[7] wOrnella Mutiw 2-Jan-03/5:20 PM Reply

I bought a homeless man Doritos with my credit card from 7/11 today...I'm probably poorer than he is...but hey it was the gesture right?

[8] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 2-Jan-03/5:23 PM Reply

its aigth but im more into the love poems sorry

[0] god'swife 2-Jan-03/7:07 PM Reply

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › god'swife 2-Jan-03/8:05 PM Reply

ok who the f gave me a zero. I'll find out and critique your work accordingly. Oh foulest being spawned of hell prepare for your day of judgement. I will be waiting for you to fall and strike in your moment of shame.

[n/a] Bachus 2-Jan-03/9:00 PM Reply

i bought a yellow fin tuna, a de-netter today, and some tube socks with my chevron americanium card he grew wings and now he's a flying fish, i heard though later, he traded the tube socks for sock in united. the smartest flying fish i've ever whipped out plastic for. know why? i can make a difference and the guilt is hurting my sole. thanks for helping me help myself, you're an angel in white with wings and compassion and everlasting life. impressive and, yet holy. groundbreaking alternatives. in all honesty, i'm mes-mo-rized and such.e

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Bachus 7-Jan-03/8:37 PM Reply

quite interesting.....how'd this come about. I hate angels...keep checking in with my poetry for a while..I have a poem about them....angels will fall

[5] Tintagiles 31-Jan-03/7:25 AM Reply

Do you know, I think this may be one of the funniest poemes to be found here. Keep it up!

[0] razorgrin 31-Jan-03/9:42 AM Reply

Aww..and you even think we care about your sad sad pain of runny eyeliner...here's a zero-flavoured lollipop.

[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom 31-Jan-03/12:09 PM Reply

I know I don't have any room to talk but I don't know the "so run far and pray your feet be swift be quick witted" just Doesn't seem to fit in well.

[n/a] horus8 26-Jul-03/11:41 AM Reply

You need to shut up and suck my Rodzilla.

[n/a] INTRANSIT 26-Jul-03/5:48 PM Reply

Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!