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I thought I could fly

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

I thought I could fly. I've seen it be done many times on tv, by people much heavier than I. It doesn't look that hard, I never saw anyone die. I wanted to be free as can be and soar through the air with the wind in my hair and even add my own bit of flair. So I figured, why shouldn't I give it a try. Because I sprained my ankle thats why.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Jan-03/8:17 AM Reply
hahaha yeah I get it! asl?