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I thought I could fly (Free verse) by teacup
I thought I could fly. I've seen it be done many times on tv, by people much heavier than I. It doesn't look that hard, I never saw anyone die. I wanted to be free as can be and soar through the air with the wind in my hair and even add my own bit of flair. So I figured, why shouldn't I give it a try. Because I sprained my ankle thats why.

Up the ladder: Equality
Down the ladder: A Fathers Loss

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12113
Posted: January 10, 2003 10:04 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 10:04 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.97 | 11-Jan-03/8:17 AM | Reply
hahaha yeah I get it! asl?
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