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Equality (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

My eyes glint maliciously At morrows break I know not who to tell Who will understand That I am chosen To smite the earth To loath all that is cruel All who are subject to greed Why should one wish to know That it is I who cause discord My own pain becomes The voice of wrath So run far and pray Your feet are swift Be quick witted Else I shall catch those that Frolic among the wicked There I too am meant to join the Ranks of those that I chase Would any one wish to destroy me? Would you change your mind if You knew I wished my demise?

Freethinker1602 2-Jan-03/8:05 PM
ok who the f gave me a zero. I'll find out and critique your work accordingly. Oh foulest being spawned of hell prepare for your day of judgement. I will be waiting for you to fall and strike in your moment of shame.




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