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Amelioration is only relative (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 As my hand is raised to strike
My pain tries to escape
Though others feel the sting
It is only momentary for them
My pain is everlasting
It shall endure through out time
It will not vanish or fade
It will not diminish through
The pain of any other
Or through the pain that
I always inflict on myself
So here's to pain everlasting
No need for fire I shall burn in hell
No need for water I shall
Drown in suffering
That shall torment me forever
Even if you don't follow I shall
Still show you the pain which all deserve
Up the ladder:
Junk
Down the ladder:
Equality
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Posted: January 1, 2003 9:19 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12116 Comments:
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ChunkyHunkyMonkey @ 205.188.208.106
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2-Jan-03/5:25 PM
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once again its agiht but im into the love poems and dont let my user name throw u off im a very sweet guy
Oh, stop whining.
Enter, readers at your own riske, for here there be angst. And shab-ass angst at that.
Death by popcorn.
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