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Amelioration is only relative (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

As my hand is raised to strike My pain tries to escape Though others feel the sting It is only momentary for them My pain is everlasting It shall endure through out time It will not vanish or fade It will not diminish through The pain of any other Or through the pain that I always inflict on myself So here's to pain everlasting No need for fire I shall burn in hell No need for water I shall Drown in suffering That shall torment me forever Even if you don't follow I shall Still show you the pain which all deserve

ChunkyHunkyMonkey 2-Jan-03/5:25 PM
once again its agiht but im into the love poems and dont let my user name throw u off im a very sweet guy




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