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Confession (Lyric) by marvelis
I may have given up my mortality, But in return I have received immortality. I may have sold my soul And left a vacant hole. But in doing so I have left a legacy. How many can say they will be part of history? Mac Beth once asked, "To be or not to be?" My answer Mac Beth is to be, forever to be. Remember me as you will. Perhaps as a heal. Hate is the most powerful of emotions With the power of five exploding oceans. While love can lead one blindly And that would be undeserved tragedy. So why be remembered with the emotion that is the weakest? Why not have remembrance through the emotion that is strongest? Legend was my aim, Achieved that which I aim. Legend I will be. And in the end you will remember me. ~~Also please check out and read my other poems which can be found at the bottom of my profile. Thanks.~~

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3866
Posted: January 31, 2003 5:06 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2003 5:06 PM PST
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[10] Teen14 @ 216.222.239.60 | 31-Jan-03/7:31 PM | Reply
Outstanding! Truly and utterly fantastic!
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Feb-03/4:50 AM | Reply
Reality is insanity it kills your belief in dreams, take a picture spill your wine, drown yourself in alkaline.

that was my thought whilst reading this and dont ask me why.

reactions are interesting when you read certain poems, this is good in my humble opinion however i do fear votes/comments will be split on this -8
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 1-Feb-03/2:37 PM | Reply
Much better than your other two. -9-
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