Re: Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos	27-Jan-03/5:37 PM
Not Bad for a chode but It seems a little repetive i gave it a six
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Jan-03/7:01 PM
Yikes you got alot of anger packed into those 15 lines there. its sweet dude perfect ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Jan-03/7:07 PM
Hey don't let these other guys get you down. I like it. Its simple but honest.
Re: The lyric of the cabbage by Dostoyevsky	29-Jan-03/1:32 PM
Ok a Poem about vegatables that mentions Dr. Lector? Just for mentioning the last name of Hannibal you Would get a ten by me but still, Cabbage? Hows an 8 sound.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jan-03/1:35 PM
Wow, I wish i Liked my dad that much. Almost sounds a little homo the broken heart. still its good work and a ten by me.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jan-03/2:01 PM
nicest words razorgrin has ever wrote but he is right. this is a kick ass poem
Re: Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin	29-Jan-03/2:09 PM
You said i was like charles manson? Like you have room to talk. your creepy. But oddly enough i find this poem so funny i gave it a ten. now i need to go gouge me eyes out for reading this.
Re: Perversions by razorgrin	29-Jan-03/2:20 PM
not as funny as 3. might it be possibble to get you to write a 4th? these are just too interesting.
Re: perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin	29-Jan-03/2:24 PM
Eww... Sick but not as good as the others this get a 7. It might have been more if i had any clue as to what scat was.
Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar	29-Jan-03/2:41 PM
Nice title. I felt like that too(although never on a horse).
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	29-Jan-03/2:51 PM
such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.
Re: Breaking Away by wickedemon4	29-Jan-03/3:15 PM
Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.
Re: The poemranker desk by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:16 PM
I know its probably just one of those random things seeing as to how this was here before i even joined poemranker but your first "dootle" looks like a bunny and this is just so cool so 10
Re: The Birds by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:18 PM
not your best work but still interesting so i'll give it a 7
Re: me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:27 PM
your a Mondern Day Confusus
Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:30 PM
original. strange but original. bsed soley on that a ten.
Re: Until by lunar	29-Jan-03/4:32 PM
Very sweet. I'm a sucker for break ups so its an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jan-03/4:38 PM
Its nice now i can't wait to see the end product
Re: ending by Limness	29-Jan-03/5:16 PM
must not have been hidden to well if you found it but nice as far as a Haiku goes so I give it a 9. P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	29-Jan-03/5:20 PM
Wow were screwed up fairy tale you got there but i liked it till i got to the captain part but it got good again with the wolf so here is a great big Eight