poemranker ::Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar

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Free verse № 35743

Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many.

by lunar

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jan 2003 · 7 comments

I am removed, just drifting, On a sea of lost hopes On waves of mixed feelings. Their lives are petty, Their struggles in vain, But still they have a hold on me, Although i am so changed. I cant believe i lost your trust, somewhere along the way, Although i know i am to blame, I cant think what to say. Their game is one i cannot play, Their rules i do not know, If only i had taken a different way And not gone all alone.

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A favorite of thepinkbunnyofdoom.

7 comments

[10] Dostoyevsky 13-Jan-03/2:21 PM Reply
ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!
[9] T'ien 13-Jan-03/2:36 PM Reply
10's seem so empty
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Jan-03/3:12 PM Reply
shit, or get off the pot. yeah that's complex.
[7] smlink84 13-Jan-03/8:30 PM Reply
It's good, but get the emotions organized and not so vague. 7
[10] MuDvAyNe 27-Jan-03/10:26 AM Reply
Deep, full of meaning, wow, brilliant
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Jan-03/2:51 PM Reply
such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.
[10] x0lovelylarnx0 9-Oct-07/6:15 PM Reply
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!