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Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. (Free verse) by lunar I am removed, just drifting,
On a sea of lost hopes
On waves of mixed feelings.
Their lives are petty, Their struggles in vain,
But still they have a hold on me,
Although i am so changed.
I cant believe i lost your trust, somewhere along the way,
Although i know i am to blame,
I cant think what to say.
Their game is one i cannot play,
Their rules i do not know,
If only i had taken a different way
And not gone all alone.
Up the ladder:
Hewed
Down the ladder:
Spring Cleaning
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.3076925
Posted: January 13, 2003 2:16 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2003 2:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.6870584 Overall Rank: 525 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Dostoyevsky @ 172.186.75.146
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13-Jan-03/2:21 PM
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ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!
10's seem so empty
shit, or get off the pot. yeah that's complex.
It's good, but get the emotions organized and not so vague. 7
Deep, full of meaning, wow, brilliant
such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
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