Re: All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl |
27-Jan-03/12:07 PM |
Very Good Description Of Feelings.
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Re: Wasted by LucidRevelation |
27-Jan-03/12:10 PM |
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Re: Lachrymalia by Lain |
27-Jan-03/12:16 PM |
You have a good flow and i like the way you used the phoenix
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27-Jan-03/1:53 PM |
Wow! Disturbing and some how facinating. Your peom is outstandly original. Great Work!!!
I Love your little Fairy Tale Mrs.God
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Re: distance by Crakyamuni |
27-Jan-03/2:00 PM |
Confusing as those "sound of one hand clapping" type questions but i like the 2nd and 3rd lines.
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Re: The Galenoi Saga by galiana |
27-Jan-03/2:04 PM |
Very original retelling of Jason and the Argonauts. That happens to be one of my favorite stories in greek mythology so I Voted it a ten.
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Re: affection wasted by milkymilk |
27-Jan-03/2:11 PM |
I'm not one to cry but my eyes got a little misty reading that. I've been in that boat too.
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Re: Spring Rolls by Ranger |
27-Jan-03/2:19 PM |
Sorry dude to tell the truth this peom is kinda lame. No offence to you or anything. Just A question Is there some hidden meaning here that we're not getting? Just asking.
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Re: winter by w~* ATHENA *~w |
27-Jan-03/2:22 PM |
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Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
27-Jan-03/2:29 PM |
I loved it. Don't change it no matter what anyone says.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jan-03/2:37 PM |
you gotta love the 6 string guitar!
nice free verse
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27-Jan-03/2:49 PM |
That has got to be the wierdest thing i've ever read. Trust me not an easy feat. also the most original thing i've ever read. I give it a perfect ten.
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Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
27-Jan-03/2:53 PM |
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Re: amanda by famenglory |
27-Jan-03/4:09 PM |
Ouch you scare me. Its short but hey i like it
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jan-03/4:37 PM |
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27-Jan-03/4:54 PM |
I downloaded you singing this from gangbox. Its a cool Song you should become a singer.
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Re: Forgotten by famenglory |
27-Jan-03/5:06 PM |
Keep Up the good work famenglory.
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