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Wasted (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
Nightmares become reality, and reality fades away into its own insanity. Lonely hearts bleed pain. Tired eyes shed toxic tears. Exhausted minds breed insanity. What will tomorrow bring? Lost in the familiarity, Forgotten in the crowds, Tired lonely little girl Wasting away in front of your eyes. You're a little girl Wasting away your dreams Tired goodbyes Exhausted threats You're a little girl Wasting away in front of your eyes. What happened to yesterday? Constantly shifting emotions Forever changing devotions The state of mind is lost Wondering how far I can push myself Sometimes I wonder if--I--am--more--than--just--me.

Up the ladder: Thank You Mom
Down the ladder: Untitled #4

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.086177
Overall Rank: 13317
Posted: May 14, 2002 7:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2002 9:31 AM PDT
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[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 27-Jan-03/12:10 PM | Reply
I like it
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