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Wasted (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
Nightmares become reality,
and reality fades away into
its own insanity.
Lonely hearts bleed pain.
Tired eyes shed toxic tears.
Exhausted minds breed insanity.
What will tomorrow bring?
Lost in the familiarity,
Forgotten in the crowds,
Tired lonely little girl
Wasting away in front of your eyes.
You're a little girl
Wasting away your dreams
Tired goodbyes
Exhausted threats
You're a little girl
Wasting away in front of your eyes.
What happened to yesterday?
Constantly shifting emotions
Forever changing devotions
The state of mind is lost
Wondering how far I can push myself
Sometimes I wonder
if--I--am--more--than--just--me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.086177
Overall Rank: 13322
Posted: May 14, 2002 7:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2002 9:31 AM PDT
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