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Forgotten (Free verse) by famenglory
From skinned knees and easily preoccupied
To dropping cherry bombs on that fisherman,
You both have been on either side
God couldn't have made a better plan
You always knew from the beginning
That I would be a shining star
We three made it through thick and thin, always winning
And so to you I dedicate this memoir
Though most good things end in a flash
For you it ended in something forgotten.
You didn't have to be, yet you were rash.
Wayant, your angel wings turned rotten
Does it really take the death of a spouse,
Just to bring a light to your eyes?
Your pride makes you as insignificant as a mouse.
to quote: "Time flies, and then no need to endure anymore, time dies"
Here's a secret, as the hourglass turns, you don't get any younger
Just more stubborn by the second.
Never could satisfy the hunger
Its not only your happiness you pawned...
I know, as well, that i am forever in Arlington,
But that doesn't mean what we had once is lost.
Walter, take your chance, its all or none
Just think of what your stubborness has cost.
From skinned knees and easily preoccupied
To dropping cherry bombs on that fisherman,
Must you really chose a side?
I wish you had come up with a better plan
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.076923
Weighted score: 5.787294
Overall Rank: 1712
Posted: January 1, 2003 5:09 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2003 5:09 PM PST
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