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amanda (Free verse) by famenglory Be careful with this one
For on the outside you see a flower
At its fullest bloom
But if you look closer
You see that it only bloomed
To hide its dead leaves and withered roots
Up the ladder:
The Militarization of America
Down the ladder:
Truth
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Posted: January 27, 2003 3:58 PM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2003 3:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8930 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37
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27-Jan-03/4:09 PM
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Ouch you scare me. Its short but hey i like it
It's my goal to be able to write like you. I think I'll send this to my ex amanda.
Is this about Amanda?
yes, a lot of the guys i know use her for "benefits" and then leave her all alone. i guess they're attracted to her beauty but they never seem to look closer. so yes, this is about amanda
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