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amanda

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

Be careful with this one For on the outside you see a flower At its fullest bloom But if you look closer You see that it only bloomed To hide its dead leaves and withered roots

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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Jan-03/4:09 PM Reply

Ouch you scare me. Its short but hey i like it

[8] GekoHawaii 27-Jan-03/9:03 PM Reply

It's my goal to be able to write like you. I think I'll send this to my ex amanda.

[2] poetandknowit 28-Jan-03/10:50 PM Reply

Is this about Amanda?

[n/a] famenglory › poetandknowit 29-Jan-03/1:11 PM Reply

yes, a lot of the guys i know use her for "benefits" and then leave her all alone. i guess they're attracted to her beauty but they never seem to look closer. so yes, this is about amanda