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Truth (Free verse) by strider1
Waking he sees the sins of men clearly For the mist that was in his eyes has evaporated with the morning sun Everywhere he looks he sees cynicism, greed, envy And when he looks in the eyes of children he knows The future is carved in genes of lust and consumption Mankind has chosen its path and the kingmakers will decide who lives and dies Who cares The truth is No one

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8926
Posted: February 9, 2003 1:54 AM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2003 1:54 AM PST
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[8] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Feb-03/1:38 PM | Reply
The Lorde of Chirpe is still loyal, and i , his fathfull scabbard... will hold thee... cupped.
[5] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.47 | 10-Feb-03/1:18 PM | Reply
The truth is: "I am suffering from menstrual cramps." there you go. Don't worry about humanity. it's teetering on the edge anyway. (I plan on giving it a push next week, shh..)
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