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amanda (Free verse) by famenglory

Be careful with this one For on the outside you see a flower At its fullest bloom But if you look closer You see that it only bloomed To hide its dead leaves and withered roots

famenglory 29-Jan-03/1:11 PM
yes, a lot of the guys i know use her for "benefits" and then leave her all alone. i guess they're attracted to her beauty but they never seem to look closer. so yes, this is about amanda




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