Lyric № 38379

Breaking Away

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Jan 2003 · Edited 28 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

Why is it that every time I fall you laugh Why is it when they give it to ME, I get half You make it no fair You act like you don't care And you're always there to bring me down Your goal is to always make me frown You never let me be right You always wanna start a fight No matter how hard I try You'll never let it be a tie You have to win Even if means you have to sin I'll never be as good as you No matter how good I ever do You will never let me be happy You make my life so crappy But not for long That's why I wrote this song I will break away from you You can't stop me from getting through I'll leave this damned place of yours I'll bust though all the doors You will never put me down again I won't be brought into your sin I'm going to make a life for myself I'm going to regain all of my lost health You will not pester me anymore You will not corrupt my pure core I'm stronger than you will ever be I will make you finally see That you are not my master I will finally become faster You will shudder under my power I know these words make your face sour You will never enslave me again You will never hurt the rest of your kin Your people are now with me They have all begun to flee They will leave you all by yourself They will put your teachings on the shelf But for now I am still here I still live under you in fear But not for long That's why I wrote this song The End

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3 comments

[0] poetandknowit 28-Jan-03/10:04 PM Reply

Best biking movie ever made, although if you notice when he it topping 50 plus MPH behind the semi he is in his small chain ring. But, hey, it is a movie. It is sad you titled such a bad poem for such a great sports movie. Shame on you.

[1] razorgrin 29-Jan-03/6:45 AM Reply

Well, that was quite the angst-wank. Surprised you could keep it up as long as you did. Go put on some damn clearasil.

[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Jan-03/3:15 PM Reply

Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.