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Life

by Luv2write

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

Life's not so bad When everyone's sick Life's not so bad When everyone's hurting Life's not so bad When everyone's suffering Life's not so bad When everyone's lonely Life's not so bad When it's over

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[n/a] <~> 23-Mar-03/8:21 PM Reply
see other comment. unless you're 12. then go see a guidance counsellor.
[0] poetandknowit 23-Mar-03/9:26 PM Reply
What the hell is this? Woe is I?
[2] GekoHawaii 21-Apr-03/7:10 PM Reply
I've seen you do better. I know this has a deeper message but you could have written it a little differently to portray it in a way that would have been more powerful. My advice is to keep the good idea and try again in a different style.
[3] sir_heff 22-Apr-03/9:37 AM Reply
i see where your comming from. needs more style