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Sword of All (Lyric) by marvelis
The power within.
The desire within.
The time; a-coming.
The dream; arriving.
Hellfire in brimstone
Could not distone,
The desire amounting
For the dream a-coming.
Through the ages
And through the races,
Through the defeats
And unbearable feats,
The victories come;
Defeats no longer hum,
As once did.
The words, once spoken, now are heed.
"Fight with all might and victory will defeat
All foes that meet."
Wars, a-raging,
The dream still standing
As powerful as ever before.
As high as the heavens grace.
Now fear without core
Stands no chance.
Heart, dreams, love, commitment, desire, and soul
Compose the sword of all.
The smoke shall clear,
And peace shall all hear
As comes the wisdom
To create the kingdom.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.37247
Overall Rank: 13036
Posted: December 18, 2002 4:40 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2002 5:07 PM PST
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The second to last stanza is good, as is "Fight with all might"
Maybe you could put a dragon in there, and some wizards too(!) Don't worry, I'm just off in a Tolkien world...