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First Site (Free verse) by angel_uy
You feel your heart flutter
At your first site.
Eye contact is made,
You share a smile.
No words had been spoken
Yet you feel as if you shared a conversation.
As you sit on your bed all thoughts turn to him.
His wonderful smile,
His soft caring eyes,
The look that he gave you
That said he wanted to be with just you.
You lay down to sleep
And dream of him,
Sweet dreams of spending time together.
You awake in a daze
Feeling refreshed and renewed.
You look forward to your next meeting
With the man in your dreams.
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Weighted score: 4.37247
Overall Rank: 13035
Posted: December 14, 2002 7:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 7:16 PM PST
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