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First Site (Free verse) by angel_uy
You feel your heart flutter At your first site. Eye contact is made, You share a smile. No words had been spoken Yet you feel as if you shared a conversation. As you sit on your bed all thoughts turn to him. His wonderful smile, His soft caring eyes, The look that he gave you That said he wanted to be with just you. You lay down to sleep And dream of him, Sweet dreams of spending time together. You awake in a daze Feeling refreshed and renewed. You look forward to your next meeting With the man in your dreams.

Up the ladder: Split Between Two
Down the ladder: Sword of All

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.37247
Overall Rank: 13030
Posted: December 14, 2002 7:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 7:16 PM PST
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[0] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 14-Dec-02/8:06 PM | Reply
Blaaaaaargh!
[5] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 15-Dec-02/9:27 PM | Reply
check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming.

also, 'site' should be 'sight'. very different meanings.
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