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me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection (Free verse) by lunar I was talking to Deep-as-a-puddle the other day,
Saying that I was speaking to someone about heaven and hell,
"You only talk about that sort of thing with someone you have CONNECTION
with" he observed.
Ahh the sweet connection!
How we wondered what it was and how it was found!
We have searched and wondered and searched some more and found that the
connection is a strange and wonderful thing:
~It is elusive and hard to find,
Maybe under the rug or crouching tiger.
~It is often not where you find the connection but,
who you find it with that matters.
~The connection is sometimes like magnetism,
opposites attract-look where the sun does not shine!
be vigilant.
~You may have the connection with someone but
not realise it has been within your grasp all this time.
~You may think you have the connection but
actually it has been behind you all this time,
so close, yet so far away!
~The grass isn't always greener on the other side,
you can spend your life searching for something that will bring you pain!
Thats it for now. Thank you all.
(also thanks to deep-as-puddle for the input!)
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Posted: December 28, 2002 1:26 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2002 1:26 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8875294 Overall Rank: 9918 Comments:
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pain is a living mongoose scrotum adorning fashion attachment. ALL ELSE is shower curtain hoops.p
I think connection could be an interesting thing to explore, but... I had no connection with this poem beyond that.
So are you like getting married now. And is this a poem or a journal entry? Do you really need to have a connection with someone to talk about heaven and hell? There is a restaurant down the street from my house. Most likely 50 paces. I bet I could run down there now, sit at the bar, and after a drink just to establish my presence could bring up heaven or hell or god or sex or any other subject without having a connection with the person I brought it up to. It is called conversation with a stranger. Are you like 15 and tied to your hormones, because if so, then forgive me. Everything at that age is so dramatic. It is life without a soundtrack.
well i am 16 does that count?
Do you have a crouching tiger in your living room? The nature of "the connection" is that you find it with the right person, right? Otherwise it wouldn't be there? Does *who* you find it with matter if it can only be found with the right person?
Where the sun does not shine implies that you find it in his crotch. This isn't really a poem so much as a list of personal proverbs.
After reading this I begin to imagine you are decieving me. Maybe you are someone else, pulling my leg. "Were the sun does not shine" means up your ass were I come from.
maybe i am myself, but i am not trying to decieve anyone. my friend DAAP wrote that part but i have heard that where the sun does not shine is up ur ass but i completely forgot - i wonder if he [daap] knows that? i think it is more of an american saying anyway since the simpsons is the only place i have heard it said.
My crotch is a dark and evil place! i forbid ne of you to visit it! ass for it being up some strangers ass, ur completly and utterly correct! How did u ever discover this?
and hey come on, we were all 15 once! PSMA
you are still 15 darling.
HOW CAN DARK ANGEL BE SO BLIND??? CLEARLY IT IS HE YOU ADORE.
gallet lunar doesnt even no dark angel in real life hes in a different country?!?!?
And just what country do you think I'm in, Lark?
i assume america from ur slack jawed retarded approach
oooooooh thats really "harsh"
Ahh wrong! GUTTED TO THE MAX!
Dark angel i now believe you completly are 14 and from America since no other type of people say "gutted to the max"
Well you're extra-wrong!! DOUBLE-GUTTED TO THE MAX!!!!11
Now you are just re-enforcing my point.
Really? I hadn't thought about it like that. Cack-Wagon.
Since i am not from America your cack-wagon insult is lost on me im very sorry. isnt is time for you to go to bed anyway?
It's not an insult. It's a Cack-Wagon. In any case, 'cack' is a word completely unknown to Americans, who also have no idea how funny they sound when they say they're wearing 'khaki pants'.
So where are u from?
England you doof.
Is poetandknowit the same person as dark angel?!
Yeah - they're both meanies. Don't they realise life is a game?
i have another fun game for them to play its called russian roulette? Any takers?
hhmm as a poem no sorry but as an extract from a piece of literature :D
very deep and oddly like lessons, kinda mad, but good thoguh until is still my favourite ill give you 7
your a Mondern Day Confusus
I like the way you've managed to spell three words wrong in a five-word sentence.
What next D.A. you want to give me a spelling lesson?
i love your work, and i love you more, im gonna give you a huge hug. actuallyi wont cos ull get a restraining order :p but i wud if i cud
funny!
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