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by Limness

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Oct 2002 · 10 comments

I find the finite scripted in red and hidden in folded fortune

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10 comments

[10] god'swife 16-Oct-02/2:18 PM Reply

I hate you because you're beautiful. P& K will be by later to tell you this is not a High-Coup, Hi-Coo. Hey Cool poem. You are totally bitchin'.

[n/a] poetandknowit › god'swife 16-Oct-02/2:47 PM Reply

I take great offense to this. I am the great defender of the haiku. Had you read any of my previous defenses you would know that and not make a comment such as this.

[10] god'swife › poetandknowit 16-Oct-02/5:05 PM Reply

I have read all your previous comments. You are the great offender, I mean defender, I mean trans-gender. E-mail sender. Drunken bender. Bike tire mender. Just kiddin' with ya hunny-buns. You are a tad anal when it comes to h'ay cooze. Domo aregato. Unstick the toddler.

[9] INTRANSIT 16-Oct-02/3:50 PM Reply

Screw the damn fortune, gimme the cookie! 9 for your gentle opening of the baked flower.

[8] Robert K Foster 25-Nov-02/10:26 AM Reply

nice.

[8] Quarton 30-Nov-02/11:47 AM Reply

I liked this. Almost like a Zen koan in its content and ambiguity.
This is great and I bestow an 8.

[6] Bachus 5-Dec-02/10:27 PM Reply

no shit.t

[9] nentwined 29-Jan-03/3:07 PM Reply

very nice. :)

[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Jan-03/5:16 PM Reply

must not have been hidden to well if you found it but nice as far as a Haiku goes so I give it a 9.

P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.

[8] Bill Z Bub 29-Jan-03/7:04 PM Reply

you will go on a long journey