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Life (Lyric) by marvelis Upon a night
On a great height
Lies the feat
To achieve it,
Thought impossible.
But the need makes it likeable.
The reward is the greatest
And the gloriest.
Life.
Up the ladder:
e-mail from a friend
Down the ladder:
Ze invsible limerick
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Posted: January 31, 2003 5:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2003 5:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.111111 Overall Rank: 13303 Comments:
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Teen14 @ 216.222.239.60
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31-Jan-03/7:23 PM
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Very interesting poem. I got what it means and says a lot in such short space. Interesting...
There is no such word as gloriest, how about ..and the humblest.
Not a great alternative but an apt decription, I'll think about it but i am trying to read as much today as possible on p/r -6-
Uh??? I've read this Over and over again and it just doesn't make much sense to me. -3-
Get the fuck out of here. GET OUT OF MY FUCKING CAB.
You snuck in a flask tonight didn't you.
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