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Jesus rides the comet (Lyric) by Shardik Jesus rides the comet
When Hitler doesn't drive
The Pope named the comet,
So the Vatican would survive
But, I ride the comet
To a Venus lullaby
While Satan wrestles Saturn
And Neptune takes a dive
Come on dive, dive deep down
with me
-Refrain (1)
Time plays Doctor with its vague libido
Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again
Hear Poe's raven rapping at your window
Kiss the tail it's frozen, just like your EGO
So...what is with the comet?
And...how come it's so cool?
Does it give you added courage
Like the tarot's smiling fool
You should have rode it with me
It's too bad you were scared
Now you're forced to envy
Because you never dared
-Refrain (1)
Frankenstein is teaching in the valley
Count Dracula sold out to the Japanese
The wolfman has a degree in accounting
Just let me on the comet, pretty please
Up the ladder:
Truths
Down the ladder:
Women have Babies and Men Murder.
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Posted: January 22, 2003 10:45 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 10:48 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.234879 Overall Rank: 4208 Comments:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167
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22-Jan-03/11:55 PM
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running through my head...all the things you said.....trying to make sense......nooooooooooooo....7
Cant make total sense of it but you seem to know what your going on about. I love its vibe though, quite humorous was that intentional? -8
Damn fine. quality use of imagery. "Dracula sold out to the japanese" and "Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again" are mighty good. splendiferous
Darling... I did it all for you.
Enjoy... you inspire me also. http://gangbox.com/mp3/Jesus%20Rides%20T
Got to agree with razorgrin this is quite swell.
Thank you very much... Would you like to hear it?
Vuala! enjoy... http://gangbox.com/mp3/Jesus%20Rides%20T
I noticed that in the song its
"Frankenstien is teaching kindergarden in the vally Count Dracula sould his fangs to the Japanese The Wolf man went Ivy League..." and so on and so forth. Sounds very trippy much better in the song. Thanks.
Correct. I play that song (all of my songs and other's too) quite a few different ways uplugged, plugged, piano sometimes. What ever the moment calls for. i call it environmental adjustings in progress always. Your feedback is very much appreciated, thank you.
I know how that goes. I change songs as I'm playing them too. I still think the way you say it in the song is cooler than the way its written here just because its a bit more descriptive.
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